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what's up with you poolsclosed.net response to everyone's reveiws? and don't even think about putting it as a response to this one.
Author's Response:
1. Go to poolsclosed.net
2. Click a link
3. ???
4. Profit.
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it wasn't the best movie. it wasn't a great movie. but it was a good movie. i knid of enjoyed it. when you make your next flash i only have one real suggestion. when you create your loops that you repeatedly use. (such as the workers passing boxes back and forth out the truck) make sure that all the objects in the first and the last frame are in the same possition. for example the worker handing him the box. all of a sudden wrker one dissapears and starts walking a whole ten feet away with another box. to fix this you need to tack on a fragment at the end of the loop where he walks back towards the storehouse/factory. then when you see him start walking back out with another box, the flash has a smoother flow.
some of your other skill will have to come with time. one you might wish to look into is creating sybols, layers, onion skinning (i still don't know what that is), and motion tweening.
have a great day and keep it up!
-techtoast
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5/5 10/10
i LOVED the ending.
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'you may only submit your own original music to the audio portal"..."loops made from exsisting songs are not your own original work"
-audio portal submission page
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The song this is created from is free to be used, it is not copyrighted material. Besides, this differs from the original song alot, and could therefore be considered as a Remix, and I dont see you complaining about remixes. I dont understand what the problem is, I dont gain anything from posting this here and you dont lose anything by taking the time to listen to it. If you think it is going against the rules then fine, just dont review my work saying its against the rules, let the people who run the site tell me that. Next time you review please try to give a review relevant to the content of what your reviewing.
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![Broken Techcore [power update]](http://aicon.ngfiles.com/154000/154228.gif){kind=small}
it's got that primal instinct "beat it with a stick" kinda feel to it. love it man. keep it up.
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it sounded pretty promising and awsome until the drums started in. maybe it's just the mastering/recording that makes them sound that way but even so, they sound very dry and monotonous. your guitar tracks have a great start but it could use a little more dynamic action and song structure that really keeps a person listening.
keep at it
T{2}
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I definitely see where you're coming from, especially your comment about the drums. Our Second album sounds a LOT cleaner and more powerful, and is a lot more complex musically.
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