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cool

i love how she can break her leg on a tiny rock, then 7 seconds later be jumping up in down.

remarkable...

everything about this video was perfect. from the style and storyboard, all the way down the the superb animation, audio recording, and audio mixing. often you find videos on newgrounds that lack in audio quality.

i also agree with lilheart in the light that this is outstanding tv quality material.

10/10
5/5

erm...

what's up with you poolsclosed.net response to everyone's reveiws? and don't even think about putting it as a response to this one.

exotic-smokes responds:

1. Go to poolsclosed.net
2. Click a link
3. ???
4. Profit.

well

it wasn't the best movie. it wasn't a great movie. but it was a good movie. i knid of enjoyed it. when you make your next flash i only have one real suggestion. when you create your loops that you repeatedly use. (such as the workers passing boxes back and forth out the truck) make sure that all the objects in the first and the last frame are in the same possition. for example the worker handing him the box. all of a sudden wrker one dissapears and starts walking a whole ten feet away with another box. to fix this you need to tack on a fragment at the end of the loop where he walks back towards the storehouse/factory. then when you see him start walking back out with another box, the flash has a smoother flow.

some of your other skill will have to come with time. one you might wish to look into is creating sybols, layers, onion skinning (i still don't know what that is), and motion tweening.

have a great day and keep it up!
-techtoast

wow

5/5 10/10

i LOVED the ending.

lmao

that was funny. keep it up!

umm....

what secret? i can't seam to find anything...

Chaz-o responds:

You obviously arent looking :P

wow

i love your animation. very smooth and fluent, timing was great. very funny and unique. 5/5 10/10

cool

I liked this movie. It used a good sense of question i the beginning and flash backs to show deep inner feelings. I'm touched [sniff] [sniff].

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